Some of these beach haiku were written by random trips to beach.
Most of these are part of a series based on afternoons spent at the beach on Hilton Head Island with my pad out ( a real paper note pad), hoping for words with my iPhone camera handy to add illustration to my thoughts.
I wanted to see if I would be ‘inspired’ by what I saw, by what I heard, by what I smelled, by what I tasted, what I felt emotionally and what I felt tactilely.
Some turned out okay.
Some were too forced.
Some were just bad.
Some did involve some or all of those feelings.
As far as it goes, I guess I was inspired by by what I saw, by what I heard, by what I smelled, by what I tasted, what I felt emotionally and what I felt tactilely.
Please aware that most of these haiku were NOT WRITTEN on the date in the title – for an explanation of this please see The Series link in the navigation table.
sailing free sky blue sailing changing and sailing let me have spring dreams
Spring Clouds – May 2024 – Broad River at Robert Smalls Parkway
Drift, and drift on, white ships. Sailing the free sky blue, sailing and changing and sailing, Oh, I remember in the blood of my dreams how they sang before me. Oh, they were men and women who got money for their work, money or love or dreams. Sail on, white ships. Let me have spring dreams.
From Carlovingian Dreams as published in Smoke and Steel by Carl Sandburg, New York, Harcourt Brace, 1920
in any language word enough for pleasure that fills you as sun warms
Adapted from The Sun by Mary Oliver …
Have you ever seen anything in your life more wonderful
than the way the sun, every evening, relaxed and easy, floats toward the horizon
and into the clouds or the hills, or the rumpled sea, and is gone– and how it slides again
out of the blackness, every morning, on the other side of the world, like a red flower
streaming upward on its heavenly oils, say, on a morning in early summer, at its perfect imperial distance– and have you ever felt for anything such wild love– do you think there is anywhere, in any language, a word billowing enough for the pleasure
that fills you, as the sun reaches out, as it warms you
as you stand there, empty-handed– or have you too turned from this world–
that imaginative quality is expected from any form of art
SCUBA Class, University of California, Santa Barbara, by Ansel Adams, 1966
For me, a photograph begins as the visualization of the image which represents the excitement and the perception of that moment and situation.
The print represents excitement, perception, and expression (performance).
Meaning is found in the final print and only in terms of the print itself.
For me, this meaning may vary a little over time and circumstance.
For the viewer, the meaning of the print is his meaning.
If I try to impose mine by intruding descriptive titles, I insult the viewer, the print, and myself.
From The Autobiography of Ansel Adams by Ansel Adams, Little, Brown and Company, New York, 1985.
Sunset on Hilton Head, Mike Hoffman, 2023
As I understand it, from the writings of Ansel Adams, Mr. Adams could visualize the print he could make from a photograph of something in front of him.
The process was to capture the scene on a negative and then create the image in his mind through the print.
And once Mr. Adams got into the darkroom, he began to paint with light or so says one of his assistants.
He said something along the line of that the negative was the score and the print was the music.
While I miss my darkroom days, I am not sure I miss it so much CT with what can be done today … and I would enjoy seeing what Mr. Adams could do with his images.
It is still the person who begins the visualization of an image in much the same way you might say it is the cook, not the kitchen.
When Artificial Intelligence can begin as the visualization of the image which represents the excitement and the perception of that moment and situation, call me